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Mecha Lore story
Premise: Make a Lore story with giant robots.
Things added thus far:
Giant robots(Absolutely)
Players CAN use previously created characters from the Lore series, but they can't have any powers at all. They must only be highly trained mecha pilots.
DA RULES!:
1. No dragons or non-humanoid mechas! They MUST be humanoid! I won't even accept half-humanoids!
2. No Mecha-Godzillas! Make real mechas, people! The kind that look human and do bad ass things like shoot shit or....slice shit in half with vibro-blades!
3. Make sure you don't overload your mechas with too many weapons and shit! We must all have equal strength on the battlefield!
4. No one-shotting tougher enemies like heavily armored dudes or something like those things. Please take time to detail the action you are taking. Please!
Arcus' characters:
Fierce
Gentle
Layout:
Setting:
Originally, I was going for Lore being set in a hypothetical advanced future, but nah. make this a future, but set in a ....Wait for this, it'll blow your mind.....Ready? ..... AN ALTERNATE DIMENSION! *Le Gasp!*
Plot:
To be discussed.
Enemies:
Who are we going to shoot and kill? Who will we be told to hate with all of our rage? Who will make a constant mockery of us? What shall our attackers be? Who's going to be the big cheese that's gonna be labeled Supreme Asshole #1 on the black list?
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CAST
Name: Jack Russell(Yeah, I know, it's very clever. >,>)
Age: 51
Gender: male
Race: Human
Weight: Unknown
Height: 6'1
*Eye color: Yellow with black with white outlined eyepatch over his left eye
*Skin color: Fair/pale
*Hair color: Very short, sort of spiked gray hair, also has gray perma-stubble
*Body build: Built, jacked, cut, what ever other thing you wanna describe that thing, broad shoulder
Personality: Very cunning and calculating, a strong and bold leader for a noble cause
Likes: I have no idea
Dislikes: I have no idea either
Clothing choice: Only ever appears in a faded blue jump suit with sleeves rolled up to the elbows, and permanently unzipped to show a plain white t-shirt underneath and shiny black boots
Class: Group leader
Background story: Father of Eve, one of the pilots in the main cast, he was once a prominent military mecha pilot. He's since retired and spent years working on the mecha his daughter pilots. After the aliens and the companies started warring with each other, he sought to stop them all the only way he knew how. By bringing another fight to them! Because that makes the most amount of sense.
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Name: Lily Heart
Age: 18
Gender: Female
Race: Human
Weight: Unknown
Height: 5"7
*Eye color: Blue
*Skin color: Fair with freckles on her cheeks just under her eyes
*Hair color: Long and Red, in two low twin tails held by black ribbons.
*Body build: Curvy and busty.
Personality: Loves working with machines, not afraid to get dirty and always has a thrill with tinkering with mechas.
Likes: Mechas, machines, tools, tinkering with mechas
Dislikes: .....bitter food
Clothing choice: Wears a white, form fitting low-cut tank top, blue overalls with very short shorts with slits on the sides, revealing her hips, brown boots covering her ankles and white socks poking from the top of the shoes, also wears a blue bandana on her head and welding goggles on her forehead with a tool belt around her waist
Class: Group technician/mechanic
Background story: A young woman who grew up around mechas and other sorts of machines. She often worked on mechas and cars with her father, who built the mecha, the Radius, which disappeared during a fire at her father's workshop that killed her old man and only family. She met Jack and Eve while she was only on a hillside outside of a town somewhere before the events of the story and joined their team.
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Name: Andrew
Age: 20
Gender: m
Race: human
Weight:
Height: 5'6" - 5'10"
*Eye color: brown
*Skin color: white
*Hair color: black
*Body build: average, nothing too remarkable
Personality: quiet, keeps to himself, often bored, boring to be around, hint of depression that may be much more than he lets on, nice to others
Likes: being alone, quiet places
Dislikes: being alone, not having friends
Sexuality: "Not going to be able to get laid anyway, what's the point of having a sexuality?"
Clothing choice: average clothes, nothing that stands out
Background story: (Not willing to share)
Pic:
Mech
name: metal overlord
weight classification: heavy
colors: gunmetal gray
weapons: wrist mounted gattling guns, railgun cannon on right shoulder, multi-barrel missile launcher on left
description: standard human build from the waist up with massive treads underneath
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Name: Eve Russel
Age: 12
Gender: Female
Race: Human
Weight: I dunno. whatever 12 year olds way.
Height: 4'10"
*Eye color: deep purple
*Skin color: pale
*Hair color: really light purple/pinkish
*Body build: slim
Personality: serious, studious, feeling, intuitive, INTP. Is a psychic.
Likes: books, studying, intellectual things.
Dislikes: sports, tiring activities, working, fighting
Sexuality: none, she's twelve, you pervert.
Clothing choice: normal, plain clothes. For her new job, she wears one of those skin-tight plugsuits, white in color with lilac trip
Class: soldier/psychic
Background story: Daughter of Jack Russel. not much in terms of background. Really close to her dad, because he's all she has left. She's also known Lily for a long time, and almost sees her as a sister.
mech:
name: Pulsar SV Mk.II
weight classification: Light
colors: the head is dark purple, the chest is silver, the shoulders are dark purple, the arms are silver, the elbows lilac, the forearms dark purple, the hands silver, the abdomen silver, the waist dark purple, the thighs silver, the knees lilac, the shins purple, the feet silver, the jetpack/boosters on the back is black.
weapons: Twin vibro-sabers
description: slim/athletic humanoid build. The jet boosters on the back can allow gliding, and limited hovering.
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Name: Fierce Massano
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Race: Human
Weight: unknown
Height: 5'7
*Eye color: Silver
*Skin color: Slightly tanned
*Hair color: Same as original Fierce
*Body build: Same as original Fierce
Personality: Same as original Fierce
Clothing choice: Usually wears a black leather longcoat with a silver skull with a katana and plasma rifle silhouette behind it, and black leather pants with blacked heeled boots that are possibly also leather, putting her at a standing height of 5"9.
Drive suit(official name of the suits worn by the pilots of the story): It is a mixture of black and white. On the arms, they have a white underside and black topside that have clockwise swhirls on the shoulders. The middle and ring fingers are white while the index and pinkies are black, the thumbs are black on the bottom and white on the tips. The chest is black across her breasts and the underbust to the stomach is somewhat translucent. The legs are black with white on the inner thighs.
Class: Ace pilot
Background story: She is a thief and former leader of a notorious biker gang. Two years prior to the story, her gang was forcefully disbanded by her sister, Gentle after breaking up a human trafficking ring Fierce actually had no part in and was completely oblivious of. She was also the strongest member of the gang and was one of only three members who had access to a mecha, Fierce had the Radius, which she stole from a burning hangar.
Fiere'ce mecha
name: A-001 Radius AKA"The Radius"
weight classification: Light
colors: All white
weapons: Buster vibro-sword
description: The Radius is an all white mecha, mostly because it never actually got painted after it was finished shortly before Lily's father perished in the fire that took his life. It is made as a female model of mecha. On its waist, it has a skirt-like armor consisting of four separate pieces, on the front, back and sides. At the tips, are hover units as the pieces are jointed to lift and help the Radius to glide across the ground. For the most part, the Radius is very humanoid, the face looks as if it is wearing a helmet and the feet are propped on high heels, near the knee joints, on the sides are small rocket thrusters to provide the Radius sufficient lift and thrust to help it glide and provide most of its speed in battle.
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Name: Jenghas
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Weight: 194 lbs.
Height: 6'2"
*Eye color: Brownish-black
*Skin color: fair, quite handsome.
*Hair color: brownish-black
*Body build: athletic/slightly muscular
Personality: outgoing, fun-loving, social, loves the thrill of battle. ESTP
Likes: Battle, action, a fast-paced lifestyle, friends, fun, food. Doesn't mind being beaten, as long as he learns from his mistakes and wins the next time.
Dislikes: being bored, books, reading.
Sexuality: Straight
Clothing choice: Usually wears a white t-shirt, brown leather jacket, jeans, and casual gym shoes. In battle, he wears a black plugsuit with a white trim.
Class: Soldier/assault guardian
Background story: Was a soldier, best in his troop, but dishonorably discharged for willing destruction of military property when he attempted suicide after his girlfriend(whom he'd known all his life) died in a "training simulation" that was a little too close to the military compound where she was staying. He was lost, depressed, going insane, becoming an alcoholic, but after stealing a ship, flying up into the atmosphere, and then crashing down into the ground. He "forgot" to deactivate the safety settings, and survived. After his court marshal and discharging, he was approached by Jack to join his special mecha squad. After that, he shaped up best he could and joined up.
Mech:
name: Terron, Mk. I
weight classification: It's in the Light category, due to it's slimness, but it's heavy and dense enough to be in the heavy category, therefore it's the first Medium Class of its time.
colors: It's all black, shiny black metal
weapons: None but its powerful fists. It also has incredible strength, it can lift a Space Battle Frigate. Its fists can also be fired as projectiles, kept attached by steel-filament ropes.(THAT'S A THING, SHADDAP.)
description: It's humanoid, but kind of short, but stocky, stout, and incredibly dense.
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Name: Gentle Hirasa
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Race: Human
Weight: Unknown
Height: 5'5
*Eye color: Silver
*Skin color: Fair
*Hair color: Lilac, same bangs, hair is pulled up in the back into a small ponytail
*Body build: Same as always
Personality: Doesn't like criminals, corruption or anything violating the law. Always wants what's best for the good of everyone she knows and loves. Admires her father greatly.
Clothing choice: Usually seen wearing her father's police uniform jacket like a cape, usually wears a white t-shirt and white shorty shorts with white sneakers and white thigh high socks, which makes her father's royal blue police jacket stand out on her that much more.
Drive Suit: It's white with with purple swirls on the arms and legs.
Class: Ace mecha pilot
Background story: She is unknowingly Fierce's twin sister. The two were separated at birth when Gentle was adopted into the rich Hirasa family, known for its long line of police chiefs. She always spend a great deal of time with her father and respected and admired him greatly. Just a year before the events of the story, her beloved father was gunned down by members of Fierce's street gang. Ever since then, she's sworn to take down the gang, which she did single-handedly with the use of her father's personal mecha, the Dynamus.
Her mecha
name: DX-0010 "1200 series" Dynamus AKA The Dynamus
weight classification: Aerial
colors: Black and navy blue
weapons: Twin automatic rail guns as hand guns, plasma assault rifle
description: Thanks to Lily's handiwork, the Dynamus, which was formerly an all navy blue male-modeled Mecha, was changed to a female-model. The first noticebale black addition is the wings on its back with eject plasma thrusters that are capable of reaching mach 2. The head was slimmed down from a masculine face to a more feminine face, but was kept navy blue, the mecha now rests on new legs that appear as black high-heeled boots, which contain more plasma thrusts in the soles of the feet. The Dynamus was also given a black skirt, matching the Radius' skirt since Lily thought the Radius' skirt was cool. The chest now resemble a a woman's chest as the torso that was once huge and masculine is now more stream-lined and feminine, the breast area, which also supports the wings, was painted black to match the black wings. The thighs were given special holster attachments so the Dynamus has a resting place for its hand guns.
Things added thus far:
Giant robots(Absolutely)
Players CAN use previously created characters from the Lore series, but they can't have any powers at all. They must only be highly trained mecha pilots.
DA RULES!:
1. No dragons or non-humanoid mechas! They MUST be humanoid! I won't even accept half-humanoids!
2. No Mecha-Godzillas! Make real mechas, people! The kind that look human and do bad ass things like shoot shit or....slice shit in half with vibro-blades!
3. Make sure you don't overload your mechas with too many weapons and shit! We must all have equal strength on the battlefield!
4. No one-shotting tougher enemies like heavily armored dudes or something like those things. Please take time to detail the action you are taking. Please!
Arcus' characters:
Fierce
Gentle
Layout:
Setting:
Originally, I was going for Lore being set in a hypothetical advanced future, but nah. make this a future, but set in a ....Wait for this, it'll blow your mind.....Ready? ..... AN ALTERNATE DIMENSION! *Le Gasp!*
Plot:
To be discussed.
Enemies:
Who are we going to shoot and kill? Who will we be told to hate with all of our rage? Who will make a constant mockery of us? What shall our attackers be? Who's going to be the big cheese that's gonna be labeled Supreme Asshole #1 on the black list?
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CAST
Name: Jack Russell(Yeah, I know, it's very clever. >,>)
Age: 51
Gender: male
Race: Human
Weight: Unknown
Height: 6'1
*Eye color: Yellow with black with white outlined eyepatch over his left eye
*Skin color: Fair/pale
*Hair color: Very short, sort of spiked gray hair, also has gray perma-stubble
*Body build: Built, jacked, cut, what ever other thing you wanna describe that thing, broad shoulder
Personality: Very cunning and calculating, a strong and bold leader for a noble cause
Likes: I have no idea
Dislikes: I have no idea either
Clothing choice: Only ever appears in a faded blue jump suit with sleeves rolled up to the elbows, and permanently unzipped to show a plain white t-shirt underneath and shiny black boots
Class: Group leader
Background story: Father of Eve, one of the pilots in the main cast, he was once a prominent military mecha pilot. He's since retired and spent years working on the mecha his daughter pilots. After the aliens and the companies started warring with each other, he sought to stop them all the only way he knew how. By bringing another fight to them! Because that makes the most amount of sense.
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Name: Lily Heart
Age: 18
Gender: Female
Race: Human
Weight: Unknown
Height: 5"7
*Eye color: Blue
*Skin color: Fair with freckles on her cheeks just under her eyes
*Hair color: Long and Red, in two low twin tails held by black ribbons.
*Body build: Curvy and busty.
Personality: Loves working with machines, not afraid to get dirty and always has a thrill with tinkering with mechas.
Likes: Mechas, machines, tools, tinkering with mechas
Dislikes: .....bitter food
Clothing choice: Wears a white, form fitting low-cut tank top, blue overalls with very short shorts with slits on the sides, revealing her hips, brown boots covering her ankles and white socks poking from the top of the shoes, also wears a blue bandana on her head and welding goggles on her forehead with a tool belt around her waist
Class: Group technician/mechanic
Background story: A young woman who grew up around mechas and other sorts of machines. She often worked on mechas and cars with her father, who built the mecha, the Radius, which disappeared during a fire at her father's workshop that killed her old man and only family. She met Jack and Eve while she was only on a hillside outside of a town somewhere before the events of the story and joined their team.
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Name: Andrew
Age: 20
Gender: m
Race: human
Weight:
Height: 5'6" - 5'10"
*Eye color: brown
*Skin color: white
*Hair color: black
*Body build: average, nothing too remarkable
Personality: quiet, keeps to himself, often bored, boring to be around, hint of depression that may be much more than he lets on, nice to others
Likes: being alone, quiet places
Dislikes: being alone, not having friends
Sexuality: "Not going to be able to get laid anyway, what's the point of having a sexuality?"
Clothing choice: average clothes, nothing that stands out
Background story: (Not willing to share)
Pic:
Mech
name: metal overlord
weight classification: heavy
colors: gunmetal gray
weapons: wrist mounted gattling guns, railgun cannon on right shoulder, multi-barrel missile launcher on left
description: standard human build from the waist up with massive treads underneath
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Name: Eve Russel
Age: 12
Gender: Female
Race: Human
Weight: I dunno. whatever 12 year olds way.
Height: 4'10"
*Eye color: deep purple
*Skin color: pale
*Hair color: really light purple/pinkish
*Body build: slim
Personality: serious, studious, feeling, intuitive, INTP. Is a psychic.
Likes: books, studying, intellectual things.
Dislikes: sports, tiring activities, working, fighting
Sexuality: none, she's twelve, you pervert.
Clothing choice: normal, plain clothes. For her new job, she wears one of those skin-tight plugsuits, white in color with lilac trip
Class: soldier/psychic
Background story: Daughter of Jack Russel. not much in terms of background. Really close to her dad, because he's all she has left. She's also known Lily for a long time, and almost sees her as a sister.
mech:
name: Pulsar SV Mk.II
weight classification: Light
colors: the head is dark purple, the chest is silver, the shoulders are dark purple, the arms are silver, the elbows lilac, the forearms dark purple, the hands silver, the abdomen silver, the waist dark purple, the thighs silver, the knees lilac, the shins purple, the feet silver, the jetpack/boosters on the back is black.
weapons: Twin vibro-sabers
description: slim/athletic humanoid build. The jet boosters on the back can allow gliding, and limited hovering.
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Name: Fierce Massano
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Race: Human
Weight: unknown
Height: 5'7
*Eye color: Silver
*Skin color: Slightly tanned
*Hair color: Same as original Fierce
*Body build: Same as original Fierce
Personality: Same as original Fierce
Clothing choice: Usually wears a black leather longcoat with a silver skull with a katana and plasma rifle silhouette behind it, and black leather pants with blacked heeled boots that are possibly also leather, putting her at a standing height of 5"9.
Drive suit(official name of the suits worn by the pilots of the story): It is a mixture of black and white. On the arms, they have a white underside and black topside that have clockwise swhirls on the shoulders. The middle and ring fingers are white while the index and pinkies are black, the thumbs are black on the bottom and white on the tips. The chest is black across her breasts and the underbust to the stomach is somewhat translucent. The legs are black with white on the inner thighs.
Class: Ace pilot
Background story: She is a thief and former leader of a notorious biker gang. Two years prior to the story, her gang was forcefully disbanded by her sister, Gentle after breaking up a human trafficking ring Fierce actually had no part in and was completely oblivious of. She was also the strongest member of the gang and was one of only three members who had access to a mecha, Fierce had the Radius, which she stole from a burning hangar.
Fiere'ce mecha
name: A-001 Radius AKA"The Radius"
weight classification: Light
colors: All white
weapons: Buster vibro-sword
description: The Radius is an all white mecha, mostly because it never actually got painted after it was finished shortly before Lily's father perished in the fire that took his life. It is made as a female model of mecha. On its waist, it has a skirt-like armor consisting of four separate pieces, on the front, back and sides. At the tips, are hover units as the pieces are jointed to lift and help the Radius to glide across the ground. For the most part, the Radius is very humanoid, the face looks as if it is wearing a helmet and the feet are propped on high heels, near the knee joints, on the sides are small rocket thrusters to provide the Radius sufficient lift and thrust to help it glide and provide most of its speed in battle.
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Name: Jenghas
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Weight: 194 lbs.
Height: 6'2"
*Eye color: Brownish-black
*Skin color: fair, quite handsome.
*Hair color: brownish-black
*Body build: athletic/slightly muscular
Personality: outgoing, fun-loving, social, loves the thrill of battle. ESTP
Likes: Battle, action, a fast-paced lifestyle, friends, fun, food. Doesn't mind being beaten, as long as he learns from his mistakes and wins the next time.
Dislikes: being bored, books, reading.
Sexuality: Straight
Clothing choice: Usually wears a white t-shirt, brown leather jacket, jeans, and casual gym shoes. In battle, he wears a black plugsuit with a white trim.
Class: Soldier/assault guardian
Background story: Was a soldier, best in his troop, but dishonorably discharged for willing destruction of military property when he attempted suicide after his girlfriend(whom he'd known all his life) died in a "training simulation" that was a little too close to the military compound where she was staying. He was lost, depressed, going insane, becoming an alcoholic, but after stealing a ship, flying up into the atmosphere, and then crashing down into the ground. He "forgot" to deactivate the safety settings, and survived. After his court marshal and discharging, he was approached by Jack to join his special mecha squad. After that, he shaped up best he could and joined up.
Mech:
name: Terron, Mk. I
weight classification: It's in the Light category, due to it's slimness, but it's heavy and dense enough to be in the heavy category, therefore it's the first Medium Class of its time.
colors: It's all black, shiny black metal
weapons: None but its powerful fists. It also has incredible strength, it can lift a Space Battle Frigate. Its fists can also be fired as projectiles, kept attached by steel-filament ropes.(THAT'S A THING, SHADDAP.)
description: It's humanoid, but kind of short, but stocky, stout, and incredibly dense.
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Name: Gentle Hirasa
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Race: Human
Weight: Unknown
Height: 5'5
*Eye color: Silver
*Skin color: Fair
*Hair color: Lilac, same bangs, hair is pulled up in the back into a small ponytail
*Body build: Same as always
Personality: Doesn't like criminals, corruption or anything violating the law. Always wants what's best for the good of everyone she knows and loves. Admires her father greatly.
Clothing choice: Usually seen wearing her father's police uniform jacket like a cape, usually wears a white t-shirt and white shorty shorts with white sneakers and white thigh high socks, which makes her father's royal blue police jacket stand out on her that much more.
Drive Suit: It's white with with purple swirls on the arms and legs.
Class: Ace mecha pilot
Background story: She is unknowingly Fierce's twin sister. The two were separated at birth when Gentle was adopted into the rich Hirasa family, known for its long line of police chiefs. She always spend a great deal of time with her father and respected and admired him greatly. Just a year before the events of the story, her beloved father was gunned down by members of Fierce's street gang. Ever since then, she's sworn to take down the gang, which she did single-handedly with the use of her father's personal mecha, the Dynamus.
Her mecha
name: DX-0010 "1200 series" Dynamus AKA The Dynamus
weight classification: Aerial
colors: Black and navy blue
weapons: Twin automatic rail guns as hand guns, plasma assault rifle
description: Thanks to Lily's handiwork, the Dynamus, which was formerly an all navy blue male-modeled Mecha, was changed to a female-model. The first noticebale black addition is the wings on its back with eject plasma thrusters that are capable of reaching mach 2. The head was slimmed down from a masculine face to a more feminine face, but was kept navy blue, the mecha now rests on new legs that appear as black high-heeled boots, which contain more plasma thrusts in the soles of the feet. The Dynamus was also given a black skirt, matching the Radius' skirt since Lily thought the Radius' skirt was cool. The chest now resemble a a woman's chest as the torso that was once huge and masculine is now more stream-lined and feminine, the breast area, which also supports the wings, was painted black to match the black wings. The thighs were given special holster attachments so the Dynamus has a resting place for its hand guns.
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Re: Mecha Lore story
Maybe We defend the planet from aliens who want to steal a rare mineral that the planet has hidden somewhere.
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Re: Mecha Lore story
or maybe it shouldn't be so one-sided. have the enemies be humans that aren't completely evil, and the main characters won't be completely good. That was there's more depth and intrigue, and there could be evil characters who have a change of heart, and there could be good characters that are secretly evil.
But then again, it's a mecha story. we should probs go with aliens.
But then again, it's a mecha story. we should probs go with aliens.
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So basically, it's Code Geass.
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no Geese here. just mechs
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No, it's a mecha anime. Has a black and gray storyline to it. Meaning, no character's truly good. Everyone's evil.
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huh. maybe we could do something like that.
well, here's something.
a huge and powerful corporation has just launched a mining expedition on a planet that's supposed to be marked for conservation, and the miners and their equipment disappeared. So our characters are sent to investigate how they disappeared, and why they were mining this planet anyway, and they figure out it was aliens that just iced everyone in the mining foray, and it can spark a massive three-way war between the corporation, the aliens, and the guardians. And the planet could be a small planet, rich in vibrant animal life and lush plant life, and it contains a very valuable mineral and blah blah blah, and whoever gets that mineral could buy half the galaxy or something. And the story could be named after the planet
well, here's something.
a huge and powerful corporation has just launched a mining expedition on a planet that's supposed to be marked for conservation, and the miners and their equipment disappeared. So our characters are sent to investigate how they disappeared, and why they were mining this planet anyway, and they figure out it was aliens that just iced everyone in the mining foray, and it can spark a massive three-way war between the corporation, the aliens, and the guardians. And the planet could be a small planet, rich in vibrant animal life and lush plant life, and it contains a very valuable mineral and blah blah blah, and whoever gets that mineral could buy half the galaxy or something. And the story could be named after the planet
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Anyway, black and grey storylines are a bit too advanced for us beginners, so let's not go there.
As for that story, we could do that. I'd like the story to mostly be set on terrain or at least within A planet. I think that's where our last mecha story failed. it was set mostly in space, which had absolutely nothing so the large extent of travels was completely boring.
As for that story, we could do that. I'd like the story to mostly be set on terrain or at least within A planet. I think that's where our last mecha story failed. it was set mostly in space, which had absolutely nothing so the large extent of travels was completely boring.
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I guess. we could make the main battlefields in deserts or fields or abandoned cities, or space debris fields, like with wreckage of spaceships.
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Why not lush green meadows?
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why lush green meadows?
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I set up a few simple rules in the title post.
Also, for scenery porn.
Also, for scenery porn.
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I think you'll soon realize the futility of telling certain of our users to put details into their attacks.
anyway, yez. lots of scenery porn. to awesome landscapes, futuristic cities, maybe some mountains, and, ofc, space. spaaaaaaaace e.e
anyway, yez. lots of scenery porn. to awesome landscapes, futuristic cities, maybe some mountains, and, ofc, space. spaaaaaaaace e.e
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Re: Mecha Lore story
No! Not space! Never space!
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Re: Mecha Lore story
but but but
but wai?
but wai?
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Re: Mecha Lore story
Because that's what failed our last Mecha story.
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Re: Mecha Lore story
I thought you all just lost interest in it. Man, I wanted to develop that Marissa/Jack romance.
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Name: Andrew
Age: 20
Gender: m
Race: human
Weight:
Height: 5'6" - 5'10"
*Eye color: brown
*Skin color: white
*Hair color: black
*Body build: average, nothing too remarkable
Personality: quiet, keeps to himself, often bored, boring to be around, hint of depression that may be much more than he lets on, nice to others
Likes: being alone, quiet places
Dislikes: being alone, not having friends
Sexuality: "Used to be straight but then I realized that I was never going to be able to get laid anyway, what's the point of having a sexuality?"
Clothing choice: average clothes, nothing that stands out
Background story: A highly skilled mercenary formerly under the employment of Steel Mallet Industries. Andrew was sent on a suicide mission that would compromise the entire company should it be released to the public, so when Andrew survived, the SMI then tried to kill him. He managed to escape but was shot in the head; miraculously Andrew survived the shot but lost all memory of who he was. Managing to kill the SMI security surrounding him, Andrew escaped into his mech and now wanders the planet aimlessly, with the only hint of who he is was the dog tags he wears and his ID taped to the cockpit of his mech.
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Mech
name: metal overlord
weight classification: heavy
colors: gunmetal gray
weapons: wrist mounted gattling guns, railgun cannon on right shoulder, multi-barrel missile launcher on left
description: standard human build from the waist up with massive treads underneath
Age: 20
Gender: m
Race: human
Weight:
Height: 5'6" - 5'10"
*Eye color: brown
*Skin color: white
*Hair color: black
*Body build: average, nothing too remarkable
Personality: quiet, keeps to himself, often bored, boring to be around, hint of depression that may be much more than he lets on, nice to others
Likes: being alone, quiet places
Dislikes: being alone, not having friends
Sexuality: "Used to be straight but then I realized that I was never going to be able to get laid anyway, what's the point of having a sexuality?"
Clothing choice: average clothes, nothing that stands out
Background story: A highly skilled mercenary formerly under the employment of Steel Mallet Industries. Andrew was sent on a suicide mission that would compromise the entire company should it be released to the public, so when Andrew survived, the SMI then tried to kill him. He managed to escape but was shot in the head; miraculously Andrew survived the shot but lost all memory of who he was. Managing to kill the SMI security surrounding him, Andrew escaped into his mech and now wanders the planet aimlessly, with the only hint of who he is was the dog tags he wears and his ID taped to the cockpit of his mech.
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Mech
name: metal overlord
weight classification: heavy
colors: gunmetal gray
weapons: wrist mounted gattling guns, railgun cannon on right shoulder, multi-barrel missile launcher on left
description: standard human build from the waist up with massive treads underneath
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Name: Eve Russel
Age: 12
Gender: Female
Race: Human
Weight: I dunno. whatever 12 year olds way.
Height: 4'10"
*Eye color: deep purple
*Skin color: pale
*Hair color: really light purple/pinkish
*Body build: slim
Personality: serious, studious, feeling, intuitive, INTP. Is a psychic.
Likes: books, studying, intellectual things.
Dislikes: sports, tiring activities, working, fighting
Sexuality: none, she's twelve, you pervert.
Clothing choice: normal, plain clothes. For her new job, she wears one of those skin-tight plugsuits, white in color with lilac trip
Class: soldier/psychic
Background story: Daughter of Jack Russel. not much in terms of background. Really close to her dad, because he's all she has left. She's also known Lily for a long time, and almost sees her as a sister.
mech:
name: Pulsar SV Mk.II
weight classification: Light
colors: the head is dark purple, the chest is silver, the shoulders are dark purple, the arms are silver, the elbows lilac, the forearms dark purple, the hands silver, the abdomen silver, the waist dark purple, the thighs silver, the knees lilac, the shins purple, the feet silver, the jetpack/boosters on the back is black.
weapons: Twin vibro-sabers
description: slim/athletic humanoid build. The jet boosters on the back can allow gliding, and limited hovering.
Age: 12
Gender: Female
Race: Human
Weight: I dunno. whatever 12 year olds way.
Height: 4'10"
*Eye color: deep purple
*Skin color: pale
*Hair color: really light purple/pinkish
*Body build: slim
Personality: serious, studious, feeling, intuitive, INTP. Is a psychic.
Likes: books, studying, intellectual things.
Dislikes: sports, tiring activities, working, fighting
Sexuality: none, she's twelve, you pervert.
Clothing choice: normal, plain clothes. For her new job, she wears one of those skin-tight plugsuits, white in color with lilac trip
Class: soldier/psychic
Background story: Daughter of Jack Russel. not much in terms of background. Really close to her dad, because he's all she has left. She's also known Lily for a long time, and almost sees her as a sister.
mech:
name: Pulsar SV Mk.II
weight classification: Light
colors: the head is dark purple, the chest is silver, the shoulders are dark purple, the arms are silver, the elbows lilac, the forearms dark purple, the hands silver, the abdomen silver, the waist dark purple, the thighs silver, the knees lilac, the shins purple, the feet silver, the jetpack/boosters on the back is black.
weapons: Twin vibro-sabers
description: slim/athletic humanoid build. The jet boosters on the back can allow gliding, and limited hovering.
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Name: Jenghas
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Weight: 194 lbs.
Height: 6'2"
*Eye color: Brownish-black
*Skin color: fair, quite handsome.
*Hair color: brownish-black
*Body build: athletic/slightly muscular
Personality: outgoing, fun-loving, social, loves the thrill of battle. ESTP
Likes: Battle, action, a fast-paced lifestyle, friends, fun, food. Doesn't mind being beaten, as long as he learns from his mistakes and wins the next time.
Dislikes: being bored, books, reading.
Sexuality: Straight
Clothing choice: Usually wears a white t-shirt, brown leather jacket, jeans, and casual gym shoes. In battle, he wears a black plugsuit with a white trim.
Class: Soldier/assault guardian
Background story: Was a soldier, best in his troop, but dishonorably discharged for willing destruction of military property when he attempted suicide after his girlfriend(whom he'd known all his life) died in a "training simulation" that was a little too close to the military compound where she was staying. He was lost, depressed, going insane, becoming an alcoholic, but after stealing a ship, flying up into the atmosphere, and then crashing down into the ground. He "forgot" to deactivate the safety settings, and survived. After his court marshal and discharging, he was approached by Jack to join his special mecha squad. After that, he shaped up best he could and joined up.
Mech:
name: Terron, Mk. I
weight classification: It's in the Light category, due to it's slimness, but it's heavy and dense enough to be in the heavy category, therefore it's the first Medium Class of its time.
colors: It's all black, shiny black metal
weapons: None but its powerful fists. It also has incredible strength, it can lift a Space Battle Frigate. Its fists can also be fired as projectiles, kept attached by steel-filament ropes.(THAT'S A THING, SHADDAP.)
description: It's humanoid, but kind of short, but stocky, stout, and incredibly dense.
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Weight: 194 lbs.
Height: 6'2"
*Eye color: Brownish-black
*Skin color: fair, quite handsome.
*Hair color: brownish-black
*Body build: athletic/slightly muscular
Personality: outgoing, fun-loving, social, loves the thrill of battle. ESTP
Likes: Battle, action, a fast-paced lifestyle, friends, fun, food. Doesn't mind being beaten, as long as he learns from his mistakes and wins the next time.
Dislikes: being bored, books, reading.
Sexuality: Straight
Clothing choice: Usually wears a white t-shirt, brown leather jacket, jeans, and casual gym shoes. In battle, he wears a black plugsuit with a white trim.
Class: Soldier/assault guardian
Background story: Was a soldier, best in his troop, but dishonorably discharged for willing destruction of military property when he attempted suicide after his girlfriend(whom he'd known all his life) died in a "training simulation" that was a little too close to the military compound where she was staying. He was lost, depressed, going insane, becoming an alcoholic, but after stealing a ship, flying up into the atmosphere, and then crashing down into the ground. He "forgot" to deactivate the safety settings, and survived. After his court marshal and discharging, he was approached by Jack to join his special mecha squad. After that, he shaped up best he could and joined up.
Mech:
name: Terron, Mk. I
weight classification: It's in the Light category, due to it's slimness, but it's heavy and dense enough to be in the heavy category, therefore it's the first Medium Class of its time.
colors: It's all black, shiny black metal
weapons: None but its powerful fists. It also has incredible strength, it can lift a Space Battle Frigate. Its fists can also be fired as projectiles, kept attached by steel-filament ropes.(THAT'S A THING, SHADDAP.)
description: It's humanoid, but kind of short, but stocky, stout, and incredibly dense.
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Name: Fierce Massano
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Race: Human
Weight: unknown
Height: 5'7
*Eye color: Silver
*Skin color: Slightly tanned
*Hair color: Same as original Fierce
*Body build: Same as original Fierce
Personality: Same as original Fierce
Clothing choice: Usually wears a black leather longcoat with a silver skull with a katana and plasma rifle silhouette behind it, and black leather pants with blacked heeled boots that are possibly also leather, putting her at a standing height of 5"9.
Drive suit(official name of the suits worn by the pilots of the story): It is a mixture of black and white. On the arms, they have a white underside and black topside that have clockwise swhirls on the shoulders. The middle and ring fingers are white while the index and pinkies are black, the thumbs are black on the bottom and white on the tips. The chest is black across her breasts and the underbust to the stomach is somewhat translucent. The legs are black with white on the inner thighs.
Class: Ace pilot
Background story: She is a thief and former leader of a notorious biker gang. Two years prior to the story, her gang was forcefully disbanded by her sister, Gentle after breaking up a human trafficking ring Fierce actually had no part in and was completely oblivious of. She was also the strongest member of the gang and was one of only three members who had access to a mecha, Fierce had the Radius, which she stole from a burning hangar.
Fiere'ce mecha
name: A-001 Radius AKA"The Radius"
weight classification: Light
colors: All white
weapons: Buster vibro-sword
description: The Radius is an all white mecha, mostly because it never actually got painted after it was finished shortly before Lily's father perished in the fire that took his life. It is made as a female model of mecha. On its waist, it has a skirt-like armor consisting of four separate pieces, on the front, back and sides. At the tips, are hover units as the pieces are jointed to lift and help the Radius to glide across the ground. For the most part, the Radius is very humanoid, the face looks as if it is wearing a helmet and the feet are propped on high heels, near the knee joints, on the sides are small rocket thrusters to provide the Radius sufficient lift and thrust to help it glide and provide most of its speed in battle.
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Race: Human
Weight: unknown
Height: 5'7
*Eye color: Silver
*Skin color: Slightly tanned
*Hair color: Same as original Fierce
*Body build: Same as original Fierce
Personality: Same as original Fierce
Clothing choice: Usually wears a black leather longcoat with a silver skull with a katana and plasma rifle silhouette behind it, and black leather pants with blacked heeled boots that are possibly also leather, putting her at a standing height of 5"9.
Drive suit(official name of the suits worn by the pilots of the story): It is a mixture of black and white. On the arms, they have a white underside and black topside that have clockwise swhirls on the shoulders. The middle and ring fingers are white while the index and pinkies are black, the thumbs are black on the bottom and white on the tips. The chest is black across her breasts and the underbust to the stomach is somewhat translucent. The legs are black with white on the inner thighs.
Class: Ace pilot
Background story: She is a thief and former leader of a notorious biker gang. Two years prior to the story, her gang was forcefully disbanded by her sister, Gentle after breaking up a human trafficking ring Fierce actually had no part in and was completely oblivious of. She was also the strongest member of the gang and was one of only three members who had access to a mecha, Fierce had the Radius, which she stole from a burning hangar.
Fiere'ce mecha
name: A-001 Radius AKA"The Radius"
weight classification: Light
colors: All white
weapons: Buster vibro-sword
description: The Radius is an all white mecha, mostly because it never actually got painted after it was finished shortly before Lily's father perished in the fire that took his life. It is made as a female model of mecha. On its waist, it has a skirt-like armor consisting of four separate pieces, on the front, back and sides. At the tips, are hover units as the pieces are jointed to lift and help the Radius to glide across the ground. For the most part, the Radius is very humanoid, the face looks as if it is wearing a helmet and the feet are propped on high heels, near the knee joints, on the sides are small rocket thrusters to provide the Radius sufficient lift and thrust to help it glide and provide most of its speed in battle.
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Re: Mecha Lore story
Oooookay, if we're going to do this alien girl how about we give her medium-long hair, looks 20-25 years old but actually 134, and might as well make her the busty girl if the others are two flat and one kid
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Re: Mecha Lore story
isn't it SOOOOOOO convenient that these aliens look exactly like humans?
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