Re: WIP thread

by **Darth Wiggles** Sat Oct 02, 2010 4:21 pm

I like the eyes.

by **Zoprxki** Sat Oct 02, 2010 4:22 pm

Not uber sexy but I've always liked girls with class. ^ ^

by **Arcus** Sat Oct 02, 2010 4:23 pm

What? Oh well.

by **Zoprxki** Sat Oct 02, 2010 4:28 pm

Anyway, why not making a bio for her now?.?

by **Arcus** Sat Oct 02, 2010 4:37 pm

You know, the Codus thing's kind of like a reverse of what Yuki Nagato does. She takes the coding of the universe and reality and uses it to manipulate everything, like making weapons and stuff.

Name: Eclaire Rouge
Age: 15
Occupation: techno magus
Rank: Templar
Description: An intelligent and dark girl. She's not very sociable and friendly and also has a hard time caring about other people. She never cries or expresses her feelings, when she talks, she's mostly sarcastic.
Attack type: Magic

There.

by **Zoprxki** Sat Oct 02, 2010 4:53 pm

by **Darth Wiggles** Sat Oct 02, 2010 5:05 pm

>.>
<.<
Eclaire? Strange name, but okay....

by **Arcus** Sat Oct 02, 2010 5:48 pm

What? it's a name.

by **Darth Wiggles** Sat Oct 02, 2010 5:49 pm

The name of a French dessert, but fine, your character.

by **Arcus** Sat Oct 02, 2010 5:54 pm

No, a character used it before. It was on Strawberry Panic. Shizuma's assistant was named Eclaire.

by **Darth Wiggles** Sat Oct 02, 2010 5:56 pm

Oh, nevermind....I was thinking of eclair....

by **Razorshell** Sat Oct 02, 2010 5:58 pm

by **Arcus** Sat Oct 02, 2010 6:37 pm

Whatever. Title?

by **Darth Wiggles** Sat Oct 02, 2010 6:48 pm

Mech Angels?
How's that for a title?

by **Zoprxki** Sat Oct 02, 2010 8:10 pm

Continuum Rift:Armada

by **Razorshell** Sat Oct 02, 2010 8:12 pm

that sounds much cooler

by **Arcus** Sat Oct 02, 2010 8:18 pm

Yeah.

by **Zoprxki** Sat Oct 02, 2010 10:08 pm

Came up with that title on a whim, lol.

Now, to come up with an intro event.

by **Arcus** Sat Oct 02, 2010 10:09 pm

Intro's are always a pain.

by **Razorshell** Sat Oct 02, 2010 10:09 pm

May I please participate in this story Neo?

by **Zoprxki** Sat Oct 02, 2010 10:13 pm

w/e, give it a shot

by **Razorshell** Sat Oct 02, 2010 10:14 pm

thank you. GM is making his stories way to realistic on his site,

by **Arcus** Sat Oct 02, 2010 10:17 pm

>.> Well that's his problem.

by **Razorshell** Sat Oct 02, 2010 10:19 pm

Well you know what that's like right?

by **Zoprxki** Sat Oct 02, 2010 10:28 pm

Alright, intro:

The team has graduated from their respective military academies, and after some intense simulated fire fights, the UCP(Universal Conglomeration of Peace) has sent them into one special ops unit. They are assigned to take down a dominion that threatens to engulf a very valuable part of the solar system.

I have a few more interesting plot elements in mind, but to make the story interesting I won't talk about those.

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