New, Original story WIP thread

[Zoprxki]

The general plot for it so far is that everyone will be starting in a backwater town attacked by undead and vampires under the command of an aristocrat Vampire who is under the command of a Necromancer who is under the command of a giant fire demon.

We need names for the world, town, other nearby towns/locations we'll be going to, and names for the antagonists...and I guess the King and especially the "main city" of the region.

Character Bio(include anything else you find applicable to your character):

Code:

[u][b]Name:[/b][/u]

[u][b]Age:[/b][/u]

[u][b]Gender:[/b][/u]

[u][b]Weapon(s):[/b][/u]

[u][b]Class:[/b][/u]

[u][b]General Description/Personality:[/b][/u]

[u][b]Background Story(optional):[/b][/u]

Mine:

Name: Orinx Puldour

Age: 19

Gender: M

Weapon(s): Heavily modified revolvers that shoot darts full of his offensive concoctions. Wrist-mounted blades coated in various poisons, and throwing knives of a similar persuasion.

Class: Blade-wielding Alchemist

General Description/Personality:

Easily depressed or stressed out, gets pissed when he has to fight something, as he would rather be tinkering with mixtures and potions than fight. As implied by the amount of gear he hauls around with him, he is of above average strength and prefers to be prepared for the long term rather than comfortable in the short term. He smokes cigarettes.

Despite his strength he seems less muscular than he should be, due to possessing white muscle fiber. His jaw is a little narrow, not too much so though, and he has a thin stubble that is reflective of the jaw-length black and gray hair atop his head. He wears a black trench coat(though in colder areas he wears a bearskin coat of the same color) with a dark brown waistcoat. The trench coat is secured across his body with buckles and belts and he wears black pants with a pocket watch in his right pants pocket secured along his waist by a belt loop via a chain. He wears dark brown shoes and black gloves and has light blue eyes. Occasionally he wears a top hat. He also is gray-skinned.

Background Story(optional): Has arrived in town from a long trip into this northern part of the world, and is unfavorably disposed to the idea of conflict, as he's pretty tired. His main goals in town are to open a makeshift alchemy shop, as they lack a local alchemist, and to retrieve rare and valuable alchemy materials from the surrounding forests.

[Zephyr]

I vote we should name that aristocratic vampire "Sebastian"

[Zoprxki]

Sure, I'm okay with it. I think the town should be called Cogram, just to fill that town's name in.

[Zephyr]

Name: Mac "Sarge" Duncan

Age: 34

Gender: Male

Weapon(s): 12-gauge shotgun, two pistols, 5 grenades, bowie knife, plus several weapons and supplies stored in his armory

Class: mechanic, "sergeant"

General Description/Personality: he's quite tall, shaved head, muscular build, wears a greasy mechanic's uniform and black aviators. he's quite gruff, dutiful, has most of the qualities you'll find in a sergeant.

Background Story(optional): no one's quite sure, he tells a different story every time he's asked

[Zoprxki]

These are all of my suggestions regarding areas immediately in our vicinity at the beginning of the story.

Towns/Locations

Starting Town - Cogrum

Neighboring Townships - Fogshire, Umdohl, Celiston, Nirow Heights

Vampire Horde Location - Ogustburgh

Fire Demon's Domain - Mt. Drudgmor (obviously volcanic)

King's Domain - Eagle Crest, Castle Bathory

Transitional Locations(combat, travel, etc) - Blood Run, Ogustburgh Wilderness, Twilit Crossroads, Ungent Rise, The Climb

[Zephyr]

I don't think the family name should be crest, because it gets quite confusing. Like, what's their crest? by that I mean coat of arms, or sigil....you get what I mean?

[Zoprxki]

I know...you think something up, cuz I'm...blegh.

[Zephyr]

Bathory?

[Zoprxki]

Sure, let's go with that.

[Razorshell]

Name: Rock

Age:25

Gender:m

Weapon(s): Bow and longsword And his Bear Mauler

Class: Ranger

General Description/Personality: Gruff but with a good heart and has a love of animals/

Background Story(optional):

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